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The Ongoing Comic page 6 by =geoffreydean:icongeoffreydean:

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©2009-2010 =geoffreydean
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This is my humble contribution to :iconthe-ongoing-comic: project. It was fun to do, and I'm glad there was a time constraint simply because I would've taken FOREVER on it. Quick and dirty does the trick in this case....I guess.

A shady lady and a co-pirate make their debut.

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:icondicko17:
~Dicko17 Jun 23, 2009, 3:00:23 PM
yo man its wicked- im now working on some filler pages between this one and page five- cos i thought it needed to show up to how she got in the desert- so that'll be posted up tomorrow.. you may have to change the script slightly in this- just the 'clocked the guard bit' cos i haven't done that in my pages.. u'll see- this is a great bit of story line, feel like u've semi- introduced a main- badguy which i like- and glad u didn't reveal her straiight away too :D- thats how i woudda done it too hehe :D, hopefully this character will be kept secret for quite a few pages more before shes introduced..

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practice practice practice!
:icondicko17:
~Dicko17 Jun 23, 2009, 3:05:11 PM
also- i like the nick name 'red'- seems pretty relevant and it works well with her so good job!

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practice practice practice!
:icongeoffreydean:
=geoffreydean Jun 24, 2009, 12:41:14 AM
Thanks. I took a cue from an earlier page which called her "Roja".

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It's just a walk on the sand...
:icongeoffreydean:
=geoffreydean Jun 24, 2009, 12:43:10 AM
Sorry about the hole between the two pages.I jumped a little too far ahead.

I thought she'd already hit the guard because he has a bruise in the first few pages.

I'm glad you like the elements/characters I added. I'm excited to see where they go. :D

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It's just a walk on the sand...
:icondicko17:
~Dicko17 Jun 24, 2009, 4:32:13 AM
aaah japanese for red!.. i should a looked it up new it was a japanese word tho- cool!

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practice practice practice!
:icondicko17:
~Dicko17 Jun 24, 2009, 4:34:15 AM
no prob! wanted to do a couple more pages anyway hehe!- yeah your right she did hit him- but i got the impression he was more higher up then a guard- like a detective or sumthing :D- either way its all good!

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practice practice practice!
:icongeoffreydean:
=geoffreydean Jun 24, 2009, 7:02:16 AM
:D

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It's just a walk on the sand...
:iconaloani:
~aloani Jun 24, 2009, 7:04:37 PM
hey this is boss, also nice touch with the different fonts for different folks

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momentai...
:icongeoffreydean:
=geoffreydean Jun 24, 2009, 9:44:32 PM
Thanks, man! I'm glad you and Dicko seem to like it. We'll see how the story goes from here :D

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It's just a walk on the sand...
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